Wednesday 11 November 2020
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THATS VERY INTERRESTING I LIKE (:
ReplyDeleteKia ora Carys I liked the way you said in the ice story how you put other people in the story from our class. I could imagine in my head what it would look like if I was actually in the world of ice.
ReplyDeletewhy did the girls want to be ice queens?
Rose.
kia ora carys,
ReplyDeletehow are you. i really like the kapok story like you really showed that the man was asleep from the pitcher.
maby you coud add a little bit more next time
imogen
Hi carys I like your story but maybe next time you could add more detail
ReplyDeleteI like how you said how one fell asleep.